Comments (9) on “‘Student life is not the proper time to do things. It is the time to ‘prepare’ for things to be done in future.’How does it sound??​”

  1. 1a. A trip to the ocean can be a relaxing escape from the everyday pressures of life.
    1b. You should always be careful to avoid overexposure to the sun at the beach.
    2. You should always look for grammar and spelling mistakes, overuse of words, the context in which your words are used, and the tone of your words when you proofread.

    3a. A phrase or opinion that is overused 
    3b. Amy, the quiet nerd, had a huge crush on Tony, the quarterback of the football team and most popular boy in school.

    4. Two examples of prewriting are outlining and storyboarding.

    5. There are four main steps that if followed, help in preparing for a test. To begin, make sure to have clear, detailed notes and keep any other documents that might help you revise. Next, figure out what type of studying works best, because it varies from person to person. Some examples could include highlighting, flash cards, or mnemonic devices. Finally, all that is left to do is to actually prepare. Be sure to rid yourself of any possible distractions and take breaks. Do not try and cram everything at once. If possible, try and spread out your studying. Studying a bit every night is much more manageable and can help with memory. (I chose prompt a. It is obviously not 5 sentences. If the maximum was 5 then you can combine or get rid of some of them.) 

    I hope this helps you! If anything is unclear I would be happy to clarify. Good luck!

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  2. While I do get what you're trying to say, try rewording your sentences. For example, instead of saying "Student life is not the proper time to do things," you can use this: Being a student means that you can not focus on your interests and study for school assignments at the same time. You are, eventually, going to have to focus on one thing, either your interests, or school. As school keeps students busy with loads of assignments, tests, and exams that students can't find a proper time to do the things they want to do. (see how I used your sentences here?)

    Try doing the same for your next sentence, and come back here!

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  4. a. You should always be careful to avoid overexposure to the sun at the beach.

    b.A sailboat glistening on the horizon provides a mental escape to faraway places.

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  6. the water cycle is a system that goes through evaporation then the water goes into the clouds and rains down as preparation

    Explanation:

    thats the cycle but if I were u I would do more Reasearch

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  9. Because writing on paper is said to engrave what your writing down into your brain therefore writing your thoughts is better than speaking them.

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